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I HAD TO HAVE ICE IN MY VEINS... by 4DAMANT I HAD TO HAVE ICE IN MY VEINS... by 4DAMANT
"I had to have ice in my veins to do what I just did. I expect it to melt, but it doesn't. It just gets colder and colder. And I welcome it." -The Rise of Scourge pg. 71

Scourge was the first Warriors character I ever really loved, to bad Tigerstar took his place on the bonehill of fangirling. ;P

Anyway...Scourge, the runt who killed my Tigerstarreh...enjoy! :meow:


Artwork (c) Me
Scourge/Warriors (c) Erin Hunter
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:iconxcattz:
Okay, The crit shouldn't be all that long so here we go,
c:
The front right paw, Is a little big, You should made it a tiny
bit smaller, But not by much.. c:

And maybe the toe on the front can be lowere a little to? c:

( Sorry, I'm bad at crits, Haha )

And wheres Scourges other back leg?
His other back leg should show some,
Don't forget to make sure to add something to know it's there XDDD


I don't know, I am probably wrong, Im not a Anatomy expert |D

Maybe add a little fluff to his neck? like, A little bit of fluff hanging from his neck?

But if thats your style, Okay c:
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Hey, this is really good! I just have a few pointers;

Primarily, for the vision, I think it is really good. The red and black background matches Scourge's bloodthirsty ambition perfectly.

For the originality, I gave you 4 stars because a lot of people have drawn Scourge this way, however yours is very good.

For the technique, I gave you 5 stars because i think you did very good. Although there are a few appearance issues (such as the missing hind leg, and how the right white front paw is shaped), your technique is still good.

Overall, the impact earned you 4 1/2 stars from me, the originality cutting you down a bit.

I hope this does not seem too harsh, it really is a very good piece of artwork! I hope this helps. :)
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:iconscourgeninetales:
Scourgeninetales Featured By Owner Sep 27, 2014  Student Artist
love it
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:iconkyrimi:
kyrimi Featured By Owner Jun 17, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
OH MY GOD
YOU DREW HIM WITH AN ORANGE/YELLOW COLLAR
QUICK, EVERYONE BOW
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:iconrifeefee:
Rifeefee Featured By Owner Feb 11, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Screw you Scrourge lol (great job!)
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:icon4damant:
4DAMANT Featured By Owner Feb 11, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Yeah, I don't like him. xD
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:iconrifeefee:
Rifeefee Featured By Owner Feb 11, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
i really like his collar XD lol
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:icon4damant:
4DAMANT Featured By Owner Feb 11, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Thanks :3
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AskMidshadowHQ Featured By Owner Feb 1, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Its awesome!
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:icon4damant:
4DAMANT Featured By Owner Feb 3, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Thanks! ouo
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:iconrainbowcats123:
RainbowCats123 Featured By Owner Nov 19, 2012  Student Digital Artist
wait a minute, isn't scourge the leader of bloodclan?
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:icon4damant:
4DAMANT Featured By Owner Nov 19, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Yesh. ;3
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:iconrainbowcats123:
RainbowCats123 Featured By Owner Nov 22, 2012  Student Digital Artist
after he killed tigerstars 9 lives? anyways ive read that book
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:iconairstep:
Airstep Featured By Owner Nov 17, 2012
That's awesome OoO
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:icon4damant:
4DAMANT Featured By Owner Nov 19, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Thank you~ :hug:
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:iconbramblecat4:
Bramblecat4 Featured By Owner Nov 13, 2012
His collar is actually purple.:3
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:icon4damant:
4DAMANT Featured By Owner Nov 14, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
I knew somebody would say that. :troll:

In other versions of the manga it was a red brown collar, and it was gold in Rise Of The Clans.
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:iconbramblecat4:
Bramblecat4 Featured By Owner Nov 14, 2012
thats weird.
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:icon4damant:
4DAMANT Featured By Owner Nov 14, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
I know right? XD
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:iconbramblecat4:
Bramblecat4 Featured By Owner Nov 14, 2012
LOL
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:iconbloomingpinkiris:
BloomingPinkIris Featured By Owner Nov 13, 2012  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
AWWW!!!!!
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:icon4damant:
4DAMANT Featured By Owner Nov 14, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Thank you! :iconrubcheeksplz:
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:iconcamiwolf09:
camiwolf09 Featured By Owner Nov 13, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Scourge-Awesome, but he has a high-pitched voice. Who knew that?
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:icon4damant:
4DAMANT Featured By Owner Nov 13, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
YES.
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:iconcamiwolf09:
camiwolf09 Featured By Owner Nov 13, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
XD
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ProxyNova Featured By Owner Nov 13, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Cute!! I like the eyes *o*
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:icon4damant:
4DAMANT Featured By Owner Nov 13, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Thanks! I do too. >U<
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ProxyNova Featured By Owner Nov 13, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Welcome^^
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xXHopeAndIllusionXx Featured By Owner Nov 13, 2012  Student Digital Artist
SCOURGE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! xD that part is also in the manga

i love scourge =3
HATE FIRESTAR THO T.T HE KILLED SCOURGE
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:icon4damant:
4DAMANT Featured By Owner Nov 13, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Me too, Bramblestar ftw! XD
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xXHopeAndIllusionXx Featured By Owner Nov 13, 2012  Student Digital Artist
lol xD
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litlestarthecat Featured By Owner Nov 13, 2012  Student Digital Artist
perfect!:0
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:icon4damant:
4DAMANT Featured By Owner Nov 13, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
I don't think it's perfect but thank you. :iconinublushplz:
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:iconlitlestarthecat:
litlestarthecat Featured By Owner Nov 13, 2012  Student Digital Artist
this draw are purr-fect :D
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darkcat1999 Featured By Owner Nov 13, 2012   Digital Artist
I LOVE U SCOURGE :3
amazing drawing Adamant :love:
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:icon4damant:
4DAMANT Featured By Owner Nov 13, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Thank you, I love him too even if he isn't my favorite cat. X3
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darkcat1999 Featured By Owner Nov 13, 2012   Digital Artist
:meow:
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xXSunfrostDaKittehXx Featured By Owner Nov 12, 2012  Hobbyist Artist
YOU drew this..?
OMG IMPROVMENT
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:icon4damant:
4DAMANT Featured By Owner Nov 12, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Thank you! :hug:

I tried to ditch my anime/cartoon style for a while and draw realistic, it still looks kinda cartoony but it still looks good so... :XD:
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xXSunfrostDaKittehXx Featured By Owner Nov 12, 2012  Hobbyist Artist
DFSda I LVOE IT
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:icon4damant:
4DAMANT Featured By Owner Nov 12, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Thank you. :meow:

I kinda rushed, so I'm glad it's okay.
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